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These paragraphs seemly frame George Wallace as a Conservative. This couldn’t be further from the truth. Wallace was a democratic presidential candidate at one point. This should be framed better to align with current political standings.

It maybe beneficial to write what ” Agrarian Reform” is, other than a lovely  euphemism to be substituted with Communism.

I believe there is an unneeded “the” between ‘by’ and ‘1848’.

Respectfully, the first paragraph implies extreme bias and lacks evidence to support it. Regardless of personal views, those that participated in Jan 6 has yet to receive the right to trial, which should be the main concern, as it was the main point in other chapters concerning American citizens rights. Numerous destructive riots broke out in cities across the United States that changed entire communities, the Corona virus effecting the world economy and the fear mongering… Why not report on those points in the first paragraph as well? To better understand the time period, all aspects should be reported to understand the cause and effects during historical events.

Respectfully, the first paragraph implies extreme bias and lacks evidence to support it. Regardless of personal views, those that participated in Jan 6 has yet to receive the right to trial, which should be the main concern, as it was the main point in other chapters concerning American citizens rights. Numerous destructive riots broke out in cities across the United States that changed entire communities, the Corona virus effecting the world economy and the fear mongering… Why not report on those points in the first paragraph as well? To better understand the time period, all aspects should be reported to understand the cause and effects during historical events.

Mondale also won DC

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The last sentence says “to right for voting rights.” I believe it is meant to say “fight” not “right”

I unfortunately do not have the time to expand upon this section, but I feel that the entirety of “The Crisis of 1968” is too abbreviated.  There should be some mention of the USS Pueblo, a reference to the Tet Offensive here, expanded information of the relationship and importance of RFK, the Olympics, and Apollo 8.

I hope someone will see this comment and consider working on this suggestion.

“Westinghouse” link is broken. Relatedly, watermark for “sallyedelsteincollage.com” is still visible at the bottom of the advertisement.